Wednesday, April 28, 2010

4/28/10

Today we wrote on paper during class-that's rare for Rab:)
We worked on some problems on topic sentence, the order of sentences in a paragraph, and the concluding sentence.
I have a lot of I's and me's in my essay so I'll have to fix them.
I was writing about my cousin but can't I use the phrase "my cousin" as well?
Otherwise it would be "the cousin"..

Then we had tutorials and learned about google tool bars, zotero and portable firefox.
I'm definately going to make one in my USB!

1 comment:

  1. Refer to your cousin the first time only, then by name, not as your cousin afterwords. And yes paper and pen in my class is rare although we could do it more if you like it! ;)

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